Hi Emily, I am Charlotte I am a year 5 from Papakura Central School. I really like your work but maybe next time don't put a big blank bit. From Charlotte
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Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteI am Charlotte I am a year 5 from Papakura Central School.
I really like your work but maybe next time don't put a big blank bit.
From Charlotte