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Wednesday 6 November 2019

Writing

In the dark night sky
I see sparklers burn as I draw my name

In the dark night sky
See my sister cracking the glow sticks 

In the dark night sky
I see fire works Shimmer like a Rainbow in the sky

In the dark night sky
I see the stars dancing as we set of fireworks

In the dark night sky

I see boom fire burning as we roast marshmallows

1 comment:

  1. Hi Emily,
    This is a really good poem! It describes Guy Fawkes really well. You must have had a great time on Guy Fawkes night! Those marshmallows sound yummy.

    Have an amazing day!
    Tara

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