hello Emily. My name is Alex from waikowhai primary school in Hauraki. I liked how you explained what you would do if you wore a flood.I think you chose a good topic for this and you added in some good photos for the topic. Maybe next time you could extend it a bit. If you would like to check out my blog here is a link http://wpsalexanderw.blogspot.com/ bye.
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hello Emily.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Alex from waikowhai primary school in Hauraki.
I liked how you explained what you would do if you wore a flood.I think you chose a good topic for this and you added in some good photos for the topic. Maybe next time you could extend it a bit.
If you would like to check out my blog here is a link http://wpsalexanderw.blogspot.com/
bye.
Hi Emily
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem I like house you put pictures and made all the words match like explain
Next time you could add more photos
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