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Friday 22 June 2018

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last week I did do a story About a little dolphin called bubbles. Hope you enjoy
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 June 2018 at 11:32

    Hi Emily, I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I like how you have used pargrafs in your story. next time I think that you should put it on a dock not a slide if it is just one.

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  2. Anonymous25 June 2018 at 13:40

    Hi Emily
    It's me Samantha (one of your BFFS) I really enjoyed your story. great job Emily. Keep up the good blogging, Bye Bye

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